The Whole Ten Yards

My Eterenal Quest for a Life

how the vines go limp

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but as she sits and as she laughs, the vines – such rusty vines – are creeping, creeping, creeping. they slither up the sides, the tips of their tendrils twitching [crying], but still she doesn’t see [the tears roll down the lovely hills] and her beautiful pale flesh is exposed [and dry up in the dam.] a single red vine ventures to brush against her ankle, and when she feels the icy-slick surface on her fevered skin, she shudders with blessed (so blessed) relief.

the vine wraps tightly about her ankle [such a tight tight grip] and she smiles at the caress. she doesn’t can’t won’t see the spreading flush of red where it bites – bites so hard. the second vine, the third, the fourth – all snake their way upon her and latch on. her legs go numb as they work their way up, past her calves and thighs, her waist and her stomach, but she only laughs so softly.

and when they reached her heart, her smile froze, as cold as the vines that wouldn’t melt away. suddenly [so suddenly] she felt them, constricting her, restricting her, and drowning her, drowning her slowly. her uncracked lips parted but no cry came out, because the rusty vines had absorbed them, and then they reached her wings, oh, precious wings.

her wings, those wings, how they fell to the ground, flaming and crumpling and dissolving into so many thousand ashes. her hands were outstretched and her eyes were crying [as the hills roll down the tears] yet she couldn’t move, just couldn’t move. the last vine comes and jerks around her throat, as she crumbles crumbles crumbles, one of her for every ash. yanking, the vines pull her down and down and down and down she falls, down and down and down and down she screamed, and down.

she lands on the ashes with a snapping and a shriek. “red is pain,” she cries. “red is agony, red is blood.” her head bends forward. “red is beauty, red is love.”

and at last she gives in [gives out gives forth gives such sweet remorse]

and the vines, oh the vines, and the vines go limp.

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January 15, 2010 - Posted by | Writing

4 Comments »

  1. for a website with only 342 hits, this is some good stuff and really shows me how big the internet is.

    Comment by NetWanderer | January 20, 2010 | Reply

  2. so what happened to your old website?

    Comment by CHeesE | January 20, 2010 | Reply

  3. um..wat happened TO THE WEBSITE?

    Comment by k00lperson | January 23, 2010 | Reply

  4. Hey, hope it’s okay that I’m following instead of reaading more of Winter Child…I’d rather read the whole thing and then comment, but I’tll take a while and won’t help you in the short term.

    I wish i knew what this other website was…

    Comment by Cipherqueen (from inkpop) | March 14, 2010 | Reply


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